[Sugar-devel] Review for the both proposals

[Amrit Rai]

Dear mentors,

Over the past few emails, I received valuable feedback for editing both my
proposals.
I'd appreciate to know if this version is good enough, appreciate any
feedback 🙏

Thank you
Amrit
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