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</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Mar 19, 2018 at 1:02 PM, James Cameron <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:quozl@laptop.org" target="_blank">quozl@laptop.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">G'day Pratul,<br>
<br>
Thanks for the opportunity to comment on your draft proposal.<br>
<br>
Your proposal suffers from lack of measurable controls for risks.  In<br>
general, you've added responses to the risks which are mostly either<br>
aspirational, hopeful, or procedural.  Some of the responses don't<br>
address the risks.<br>
<br>
For reference, here is what I had previously written on these risks;<br>
<br>
<a href="http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2018-February/055030.html" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">http://lists.sugarlabs.org/<wbr>archive/sugar-devel/2018-<wbr>February/055030.html</a><br>
<br>
Please do not use HTML for the beginner guide.  Instead, please use<br>
Markdown.  Markdown has a wider audience of authors.  HTML should be<br>
generated automatically.<br>
<br>
Please consider better controls for risk #3.  My post on 14th February<br>
gave some ideas.  Just claiming that you'd like to keep working on the<br>
project after GSoC ... doesn't seem probable.  It is aspirational.<br>
<span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><br>
--<br>
James Cameron<br>
<a href="http://quozl.netrek.org/" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">http://quozl.netrek.org/</a><br>
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