<div dir="ltr"><div><div>Many thanks Iain </div>Fine with me to delete Multimedia section. I feel the existing intro plus the Activities descriptions will fulfill the role of encouraging the visitor to download and try SoaS. Walter, Sam, OK with you? </div>Sean </div><div class="gmail_extra"> <div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 6:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas <<a href="mailto:iain@browndouglas.plus.com" target="_blank">iain@browndouglas.plus.com</a>> wrote: <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading. Fair copy attached. I originally included the section "Multimedia", as it is the set of Activities in <a href="http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/" target="_blank">http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/</a> but not in the Walter/Sam contribution. I think it is the weakest section. Chat jars a bit on the page, as "Chat" is used in the "Spins page template" to refer to IRC. My memory is that Jukebox is not part of the core set (due to non-free components?). Perhaps the section Multimedia as it stands should be deleted. Regards, Iain <div class="HOEnZb"><div class="h5"> On Mon, 2015-05-18 at 09:29 +0200, Sean DALY wrote: > thanks Iain looks good > > some typos: > Wwork -> Work > > FotoToon -> OK is singular not plural > speech and though -> speech and thought > Paint provides to tools -> Paint provides tools > Make Sugar activities -> Make Sugar Activities / edit existing > activities -> edit existing Activities / Browse activity -> Browse > Activity (((Activities always init-capitalized in Sugar context when > describing applications))) > > > Also Pippy & Develop should be in a "Getting Technical" section not > regrouped under "Learning by doing" please > > > Tweaks: > * Get Books. Download electronic books from all over the web. Explore > with ease the > classics and modern books from the Internet Archive, Feedbooks, etc. > > > Music - I think this refers to the Jukebox Activity, should be: > > * Jukebox. Media player to play different kinds of audio and video > files. > > However, I am not sure if this Activity is in the latest SoaS or not? > > > * Record is the basic rich-media capture Activity. It lets you capture > still images, video, and/or audio. (((remove "for the laptop" - we > can't assume SoaS will be running on a laptop))) > > > Finally, an HTML issue: the left/right curly quote marks (cf. "office > desktop") which probably came in from copy/pasted text should either > be replacd with simple double parentheses (" ") or the HTML > entities “ and ” > > > thanks > > Sean > > > > > On Sun, May 17, 2015 at 6:12 PM, Iain Brown Douglas > <<a href="mailto:iain@browndouglas.plus.com">iain@browndouglas.plus.com</a>> wrote: > On Sun, 2015-05-17 at 15:14 +0200, Sean DALY wrote: > > Peter - Walter's edits were for the Activities descriptions, > mine were > > for the introduction, no reconciliation necessary > > > > > > Sean > > > > > > > > On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 12:38 PM, Peter Robinson > > <<a href="mailto:pbrobinson@gmail.com">pbrobinson@gmail.com</a>> wrote: > > Walter sent some edits, I believe most of those have > gone in, > > we need > > to update titles still I believe. > > > > This is what we currently have, the Activities list > and layout > > are now set. > > > > <a href="http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/" target="_blank">http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/</a> > > > > We can tweak the text but I need to have the edits > > co-ordinated, > > Hi all, > > The attached text file starts from > <a href="http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/" target="_blank">http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/</a>, taken during > Sunday, > with contributions from Sean & Walter/Sam added. > > There is still some work to do, additions, subtractions or > comments > please! > > Regards, > > Iain > > > I > > don't have time to to do that so please liaise with > Walter to > > come up > > with the final edits so I can submit them early next > week as a > > single > > final edit. > > > > Peter > > > > > > > > On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 11:25 AM, Sean DALY > > <<a href="mailto:sdaly.be@gmail.com">sdaly.be@gmail.com</a>> wrote: > > > Peter - are the intro edits I sent going in? > > > thanks > > > Sean > > > > > > > > > On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 3:00 PM, Peter Robinson > > <<a href="mailto:pbrobinson@gmail.com">pbrobinson@gmail.com</a>> > > > wrote: > > >> > > >> It's already in process > > >> > > >> On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 1:02 PM, Sam P. > > <<a href="mailto:sam.parkinson3@gmail.com">sam.parkinson3@gmail.com</a>> wrote: > > >> > Hi Peter, > > >> > > > >> > I think Walter send out a good copy [1] with > headers - > > maybe we could > > >> > use > > >> > those headers? > > >> > > > >> > Thanks, > > >> > Sam > > >> > > > >> > [1] > > > <a href="http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2015-May/050190.html" target="_blank">http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2015-May/050190.html</a> > > >> > > > >> > On Thu, May 14, 2015 at 7:09 PM Peter Robinson > > <<a href="mailto:pbrobinson@gmail.com">pbrobinson@gmail.com</a>> > > >> > wrote: > > >> >> > > >> >> On Thu, May 14, 2015 at 6:15 AM, Sam Parkinson > > >> >> <<a href="mailto:sam.parkinson3@gmail.com">sam.parkinson3@gmail.com</a>> > > >> >> wrote: > > >> >> > Hi Peter, > > >> >> > > > >> >> > Peter Robinson wrote: > > >> >> >> Hi Sam, Gonzalo et el, > > >> >> >> > > >> >> >> I've worked with the Fedora web team to > update it > > some based > > >> >> >> partially > > >> >> >> on Sam's details below. > > >> >> >> > > >> >> >> Details are here: > > >> >> >> <a href="http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/" target="_blank">http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/</a> > > >> >> >> > > >> >> >> Let me know of any feedback, I personally > think it > > looks really fab! > > >> >> > > > >> >> > Yeah, it does. > > >> >> > > > >> >> > Is there a way to have different headers? > Some of the > > headings (esp. > > >> >> > Education) are not aappropriate for Sugar. > > >> >> > > >> >> Yes, provide me details in concise details and > we'll > > review them and > > >> >> get them integrated. I knew it wasn't perfect > but we > > needed to get the > > >> >> majority of the bits in place. > > >> >> > > >> >> Peter > > >> _______________________________________________ > > >> IAEP -- It's An Education Project (not a laptop > project!) > > >> <a href="mailto:IAEP@lists.sugarlabs.org">IAEP@lists.sugarlabs.org</a> > > >> <a href="http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/iaep" target="_blank">http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/iaep</a> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Sugar-devel mailing list > > <a href="mailto:Sugar-devel@lists.sugarlabs.org">Sugar-devel@lists.sugarlabs.org</a> > > <a href="http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/sugar-devel" target="_blank">http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/sugar-devel</a> > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Sugar-devel mailing list > <a href="mailto:Sugar-devel@lists.sugarlabs.org">Sugar-devel@lists.sugarlabs.org</a> > <a href="http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/sugar-devel" target="_blank">http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/sugar-devel</a> </div></div></blockquote></div> </div>