[Sugar-devel] Review Request of GSoC Proposal: Making a Beginner Guide

[James Cameron]

Thanks, I've no further suggestions.

On Tue, Mar 20, 2018 at 08:45:32PM +0530, Pratul Kumar wrote:
> *
> Hello,
> 
> Thanks for providing feedback and guiding me in the right direction.
> I have worked on it and tried to add them and make things bit more refined.
> 
> [1]https://docs.google.com/document/d/
> 1Xzn-ub8pBCQuz9-RfltzHqDZqY7uZ2xF77MFP_9fKzw/edit?usp=sharing
> 
> Kindly have a look at it and if there is something which can be improved,
> kindly let me know,
> I will be more than happy to work on it.
> 
> Regards,
> Pratul Kumar
> 
> On Mon, Mar 19, 2018 at 1:02 PM, James Cameron <[2]quozl at laptop.org> wrote:
> 
>     G'day Pratul,
> 
>     Thanks for the opportunity to comment on your draft proposal.
> 
>     Your proposal suffers from lack of measurable controls for risks.  In
>     general, you've added responses to the risks which are mostly either
>     aspirational, hopeful, or procedural.  Some of the responses don't
>     address the risks.
> 
>     For reference, here is what I had previously written on these risks;
> 
>     [3]http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2018-February/055030.html
> 
>     Please do not use HTML for the beginner guide.  Instead, please use
>     Markdown.  Markdown has a wider audience of authors.  HTML should be
>     generated automatically.
> 
>     Please consider better controls for risk #3.  My post on 14th February
>     gave some ideas.  Just claiming that you'd like to keep working on the
>     project after GSoC ... doesn't seem probable.  It is aspirational.
>    
>     --
>     James Cameron
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> References:
> 
> [1] https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xzn-ub8pBCQuz9-RfltzHqDZqY7uZ2xF77MFP_9fKzw/edit?usp=sharing
> [2] mailto:quozl at laptop.org
> [3] http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2018-February/055030.html
> [4] http://quozl.netrek.org/
> [5] https://www.linkedin.com/in/pratul1997/
> [6] https://github.com/Pratul1997

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