[Sugar-devel] Fwd: Make Proposal Better

[Ogunjirin Emmanuel]

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From: *Ogunjirin Emmanuel* <emmanuelogunjirin at gmail.com>
Date: Sunday, April 2, 2017
Subject: Make Proposal Better
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From: *Ogunjirin Emmanuel* <emmanuelogunjirin at gmail.com
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Date: Friday, March 31, 2017
Subject: Make Proposal Better
To: Walter Bender <walter.bender at gmail.com
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I just made some changes in my proposal, I would love you to help me review
it and give me feedback and I have already added a code snippet which
indicate the service worker that makes the app usable offline,​
 Sugar Labs Proposal
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1myi8vs5MfcZDIXGm-RAhsN-m-UsqvghtbimU4qcP-BM/edit?usp=drive_web>
​

On 30 March 2017 at 14:59, Walter Bender <walter.bender at gmail.com> wrote:

> I watched your video. Very interesting.
>
> A couple of comments:
> * the left hand menus disappear deliberately when the screen gets smaller.
> (they are replaced by a popup menu which is easier to use -- the new icon
> that appears at the top left of the screen)
> * I appreciate your efforts to identify the things preventing the app to
> run off line -- I would suggest that your proposal center around that
> aspect of the project.
>
> regards.
>
> -walter
>
> On Wed, Mar 29, 2017 at 1:38 PM, Ogunjirin Emmanuel <
> emmanuelogunjirin at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> ​
>>  Demo 2.webm
>> <https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2OgIblUNhcHTmN4WmFRNEE3RkE/view?usp=drive_web>
>> ​Please Sir i just created a live Demo of some of the things i talked
>> about in my proposal i would be happy if you can help me with feedbacks
>> concerning the video and the proposal together this is the video Demo
>> https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2OgIblUNhcHTmN4WmFRNEE3RkE/view
>>
>> On 28 March 2017 at 12:01, Ogunjirin Emmanuel <
>> emmanuelogunjirin at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Have actually not written any code and talking about the specifies
>>> please can you highlight the place where i made that mistake and this is
>>> the draft link  https://docs.google.com/docum
>>> ent/d/1myi8vs5MfcZDIXGm-RAhsN-m-UsqvghtbimU4qcP-BM/edit?usp=sharing
>>>
>>>
>>> On Tuesday, March 28, 2017, Walter Bender <walter.bender at gmail.com>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> A few comments:
>>>>
>>>> It would be good if you went into more specifics, e.g., you say "The
>>>> Software Is Currently Lacking A Nice User Interface", but don't explain
>>>> what is lacking or what you plan to do to address what is lacking.
>>>>
>>>> It would be helpful to see some examples of code you have written that
>>>> would serve as a basis of the work you plan to do.
>>>>
>>>> regards.
>>>>
>>>> -walter
>>>>
>>>> On Mon, Mar 27, 2017 at 12:16 PM, Ogunjirin Emmanuel <
>>>> emmanuelogunjirin at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Good day please i applied for Google Summer Of Code 2017 and i wrote a
>>>>> proposal to sugar labs to work on Music Blocks for Mobile please i would be
>>>>> so grateful if you can help me make some corrections to the proposal so as
>>>>> to make it better
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> --
>>>> Walter Bender
>>>> Sugar Labs
>>>> http://www.sugarlabs.org
>>>> <http://www.sugarlabs.org>
>>>>
>>>
>>
>
>
> --
> Walter Bender
> Sugar Labs
> http://www.sugarlabs.org
> <http://www.sugarlabs.org>
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