<div dir="ltr">Hi Peter, <div> <div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson <<a href="mailto:pbrobinson@gmail.com">pbrobinson@gmail.com</a>> wrote: <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas <<a href="mailto:iain@browndouglas.plus.com" target="_blank">iain@browndouglas.plus.com</a>> wrote: > Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading. > > Fair copy attached. > > I originally included the section "Multimedia", as it is the set of > Activities in <a href="http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/" target="_blank">http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/</a> > but not in the Walter/Sam contribution. > > I think it is the weakest section. Chat jars a bit on the page, as > "Chat" is used in the "Spins page template" to refer to IRC. > > My memory is that Jukebox is not part of the core set (due to non-free > components?). You're memory is wrong! It uses gstreamer and there a number of free codecs that come as standard. Maybe you could download SoaS 22 and actually test it and see what's there! > Perhaps the section Multimedia as it stands should be deleted. Not going to happen. This isn't time for bikeshedding, it's time for tweaking the content as it stands. </blockquote><div> </div><div>Talking about the headers is not bikeshedding. The headers on the page are not very relevant to an education focused desktop environment - they are headers for a traditional dekstop environment. </div><div>The sections are not sensible in the context of Sugar - and the "Education" section is almost like a joke. </div><div>Logical section headers are just as important as good text. People looking at websites are often very distracted and need very logical things before they scratch their head and look else where. I'm being a little assertive - but we should change the headers! </div><div>Also some very unimportant stuff: Portfolio, Journal and Paint all have different color palettes for their icons :( </div><div> </div><div>Thanks, </div><div>Sam </div><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"> > Regards, > > Iain > > > On Mon, 2015-05-18 at 09:29 +0200, Sean DALY wrote: >> thanks Iain looks good >> >> some typos: >> Wwork -> Work >> >> FotoToon -> OK is singular not plural >> speech and though -> speech and thought >> Paint provides to tools -> Paint provides tools >> Make Sugar activities -> Make Sugar Activities / edit existing >> activities -> edit existing Activities / Browse activity -> Browse >> Activity (((Activities always init-capitalized in Sugar context when >> describing applications))) >> >> >> Also Pippy & Develop should be in a "Getting Technical" section not >> regrouped under "Learning by doing" please >> >> >> Tweaks: >> * Get Books. Download electronic books from all over the web. Explore >> with ease the >> classics and modern books from the Internet Archive, Feedbooks, etc. >> >> >> Music - I think this refers to the Jukebox Activity, should be: >> >> * Jukebox. Media player to play different kinds of audio and video >> files. >> >> However, I am not sure if this Activity is in the latest SoaS or not? >> >> >> * Record is the basic rich-media capture Activity. It lets you capture >> still images, video, and/or audio. (((remove "for the laptop" - we >> can't assume SoaS will be running on a laptop))) >> >> >> Finally, an HTML issue: the left/right curly quote marks (cf. "office >> desktop") which probably came in from copy/pasted text should either >> be replacd with simple double parentheses (" ") or the HTML >> entities “ and ” >> >> >> thanks >> >> Sean >> >> >> >> >> On Sun, May 17, 2015 at 6:12 PM, Iain Brown Douglas >> <<a href="mailto:iain@browndouglas.plus.com" target="_blank">iain@browndouglas.plus.com</a>> wrote: >> On Sun, 2015-05-17 at 15:14 +0200, Sean DALY wrote: >> > Peter - Walter's edits were for the Activities descriptions, >> mine were >> > for the introduction, no reconciliation necessary >> > >> > >> > Sean >> > >> > >> > >> > On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 12:38 PM, Peter Robinson >> > <<a href="mailto:pbrobinson@gmail.com" target="_blank">pbrobinson@gmail.com</a>> wrote: >> > Walter sent some edits, I believe most of those have >> gone in, >> > we need >> > to update titles still I believe. >> > >> > This is what we currently have, the Activities list >> and layout >> > are now set. >> > >> > <a href="http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/" target="_blank">http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/</a> >> > >> > We can tweak the text but I need to have the edits >> > co-ordinated, >> >> Hi all, >> >> The attached text file starts from >> <a href="http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/" target="_blank">http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/</a>, taken during >> Sunday, >> with contributions from Sean & Walter/Sam added. >> >> There is still some work to do, additions, subtractions or >> comments >> please! >> >> Regards, >> >> Iain >> >> > I >> > don't have time to to do that so please liaise with >> Walter to >> > come up >> > with the final edits so I can submit them early next >> week as a >> > single >> > final edit. >> > >> > Peter >> > >> > >> > >> > On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 11:25 AM, Sean DALY >> > <<a href="mailto:sdaly.be@gmail.com" target="_blank">sdaly.be@gmail.com</a>> wrote: >> > > Peter - are the intro edits I sent going in? >> > > thanks >> > > Sean >> > > >> > > >> > > On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 3:00 PM, Peter Robinson >> > <<a href="mailto:pbrobinson@gmail.com" target="_blank">pbrobinson@gmail.com</a>> >> > > wrote: >> > >> >> > >> It's already in process >> > >> >> > >> On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 1:02 PM, Sam P. >> > <<a href="mailto:sam.parkinson3@gmail.com" target="_blank">sam.parkinson3@gmail.com</a>> wrote: >> > >> > Hi Peter, >> > >> > >> > >> > I think Walter send out a good copy [1] with >> headers - >> > maybe we could >> > >> > use >> > >> > those headers? >> > >> > >> > >> > Thanks, >> > >> > Sam >> > >> > >> > >> > [1] >> > >> <a href="http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2015-May/050190.html" target="_blank">http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2015-May/050190.html</a> >> > >> > >> > >> > On Thu, May 14, 2015 at 7:09 PM Peter Robinson >> > <<a href="mailto:pbrobinson@gmail.com" target="_blank">pbrobinson@gmail.com</a>> >> > >> > wrote: >> > >> >> >> > >> >> On Thu, May 14, 2015 at 6:15 AM, Sam Parkinson >> > >> >> <<a href="mailto:sam.parkinson3@gmail.com" target="_blank">sam.parkinson3@gmail.com</a>> >> > >> >> wrote: >> > >> >> > Hi Peter, >> > >> >> > >> > >> >> > Peter Robinson wrote: >> > >> >> >> Hi Sam, Gonzalo et el, >> > >> >> >> >> > >> >> >> I've worked with the Fedora web team to >> update it >> > some based >> > >> >> >> partially >> > >> >> >> on Sam's details below. >> > >> >> >> >> > >> >> >> Details are here: >> > >> >> >> <a href="http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/" target="_blank">http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/</a> >> > >> >> >> >> > >> >> >> Let me know of any feedback, I personally >> think it >> > looks really fab! >> > >> >> > >> > >> >> > Yeah, it does. >> > >> >> > >> > >> >> > Is there a way to have different headers? >> Some of the >> > headings (esp. >> > >> >> > Education) are not aappropriate for Sugar. >> > >> >> >> > >> >> Yes, provide me details in concise details and >> we'll >> > review them and >> > >> >> get them integrated. I knew it wasn't perfect >> but we >> > needed to get the >> > >> >> majority of the bits in place. >> > >> >> >> > >> >> Peter >> > >> _______________________________________________ >> > >> IAEP -- It's An Education Project (not a laptop >> project!) >> > >> <a href="mailto:IAEP@lists.sugarlabs.org" target="_blank">IAEP@lists.sugarlabs.org</a> >> > >> <a href="http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/iaep" target="_blank">http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/iaep</a> >> > > >> > > >> > >> > >> > >> >> > _______________________________________________ >> > Sugar-devel mailing list >> > <a href="mailto:Sugar-devel@lists.sugarlabs.org" target="_blank">Sugar-devel@lists.sugarlabs.org</a> >> > <a href="http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/sugar-devel" target="_blank">http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/sugar-devel</a> >> >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Sugar-devel mailing list >> <a href="mailto:Sugar-devel@lists.sugarlabs.org" target="_blank">Sugar-devel@lists.sugarlabs.org</a> >> <a href="http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/sugar-devel" target="_blank">http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/sugar-devel</a> > </blockquote></div></div></div>