The more I watch the sequence, it seems that the "Sugar, hornet, Sugar Labs" image should be the penultimate image, preceded by a blank field, and then the incremental buildup of the ring system (operating system), leading triumphantly to the working Home screen.<div>
<br></div><div>Thanks for all your efforts! --Fred<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Jun 1, 2009 at 10:37 PM, Frederick Grose <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:fgrose@gmail.com">fgrose@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex;">I mostly like it. Seems to be close to what we want for now.<div><br></div><div>Please consider these adjustments:</div>
<div><br></div><div>1. No fine print (leave that for the 'About my Computer" panel).</div><div>
2. Scale the custom school graphic example (Green Hornet) to fit the other elements, leave out the fine print.</div><div>3. Let the rays grow incrementally to complete the ring (no unfilled place holders). I feel more anticipation and suspense from the ring growing without the preview, and more satisfaction of seeing the completed color burst.</div>
<div><br></div><div> Thank you! --Fred</div><div><div></div><div class="h5"><div><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Jun 1, 2009 at 9:33 PM, Sean DALY <span dir="ltr"><<a href="http://sdaly.be" target="_blank">sdaly.be</a>@<a href="http://gmail.com" target="_blank">gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Here's the second mockup:<br>
<a href="http://wiki.sugarlabs.org/go/Marketing_Team/Boot_Logo#Eleven_Color_Ray_Variant.2C_Growing_XO_Avatar.2C_Starts_With_Logo_Splash_Page" target="_blank">http://wiki.sugarlabs.org/go/Marketing_Team/Boot_Logo#Eleven_Color_Ray_Variant.2C_Growing_XO_Avatar.2C_Starts_With_Logo_Splash_Page</a><br>
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This version includes a logo/copyright splash page and a "growing" or<br>
"approaching" XO avatar.<br>
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Comments welcome please.<br>
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thanks<br>
<br>
Sean</blockquote></div></div>
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