[Marketing] PDF for Sugar documentation

[Ryan Cunningham]

I have made some more edits; including removing the "overfull \hbox" in the resources table, and removing the reference to constructivism.

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On Nov 10, 2013, at 11:03 AM, Ryan Cunningham <rvskmbrly3 at gmail.com> wrote:

> I have made some more edits:
> 
> In section 2, "Getting to Know Sugar": Deleted "``Done.''" and replaced with "``Done''."
> 
> The period/quotation mark pair is punctuated in the correction as it is punctuated elsewhere in the document.
> 
> The corrected versions are supplied as follows.
> 
> <sugar_mono.log><sugar_mono.pdf><sugar_mono.tex><sugar.log><sugar.pdf><sugar.tex>
> -- 
> Ryan Cunningham
> 
> On Nov 10, 2013, at 9:08 AM, Ryan Cunningham <rvskmbrly3 at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
>> Thank you. I have made a few edits of my own, including adding an abstract; and, instead of deleting the "GIMP Toolkit" name, I just added a footnote after it stating it was outdated.
>> 
>> Some of the information you added was put into a new sub-subsection; and I have also added a credit line containing your name ("Edited by Walter Bender, Sugar Labs Marketing").
>> 
>> A grayscale version is provided in case the user's printing limitations require.
>> 
>> <sugar_mono.pdf><sugar_mono.tex><sugar.pdf><sugar.tex>
>> On Nov 10, 2013, at 8:22 AM, Walter Bender <walter.bender at gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>>> I put my comments inline <-- COMMENT -->
>>> 
>>> regards.
>>> 
>>> -walter
>>> 
>>> On Sun, Nov 10, 2013 at 11:10 AM, Walter Bender <walter.bender at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> Can do. But it seems you are setting a rather high bar for feedback.
>>>> 
>>>> -walter
>>>> 
>>>> On Sat, Nov 9, 2013 at 11:45 PM, Ryan Cunningham <rvskmbrly3 at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>> I would like to receive these edits in the form of a unified diff between the original LaTeX file and the new LaTeX file.
>>>>> 
>>>>> If you don't know how to create a unified diff, type
>>>>> 
>>>>> diff -Naur <file1> <file2>
>>>>> 
>>>>> at a terminal prompt.
>>>>> 
>>>>> You should have good experience at typesetting with LaTeX2e before you make these edits.
>>>>> 
>>>>> --
>>>>> Ryan Cunningham
>>>>> 
>>>>> On Nov 9, 2013, at 3:41 PM, Walter Bender <walter.bender at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>>> Ryan,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thanks for writing this. I have a few suggested edits. How would you
>>>>>> like to receive them?
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> regards.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> -walter
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Sat, Nov 9, 2013 at 10:39 AM, Ryan Cunningham <rvskmbrly3 at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>>> On Sat, Nov 9, 2013 at 7:09 AM, Ryan Cunningham <rvskmbrly3 at gmail.com>
>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> To the members of the list:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I would like to send proposed documentation for Sugar to this list. The
>>>>>>>> documentation is attached to this message in the PDF format, and should be
>>>>>>>> forwarded to the Documentation Team.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> The documentation was written using XeLaTeX, with the DejaVu Sans and
>>>>>>>> DejaVu Sans Mono fonts.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Sincerely,
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Ryan Cunningham
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> --
>>>>>>>> Sent from my iPod
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Sorry... I had some mistakes to correct, including sending you the source
>>>>>>> code.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> --
>>>>>>> Ryan Cunningham
>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> --
>>>>>> Walter Bender
>>>>>> Sugar Labs
>>>>>> http://www.sugarlabs.org
>>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> --
>>>> Walter Bender
>>>> Sugar Labs
>>>> http://www.sugarlabs.org
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> -- 
>>> Walter Bender
>>> Sugar Labs
>>> http://www.sugarlabs.org
>>> <feedback.patch>
>> 
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