[Marketing] PDF for Sugar documentation

[Ryan Cunningham]

I have made some more edits:

In section 2, "Getting to Know Sugar": Deleted "``Done.''" and replaced with "``Done''."

The period/quotation mark pair is punctuated in the correction as it is punctuated elsewhere in the document.

The corrected versions are supplied as follows.

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-- 
Ryan Cunningham

On Nov 10, 2013, at 9:08 AM, Ryan Cunningham <rvskmbrly3 at gmail.com> wrote:

> Thank you. I have made a few edits of my own, including adding an abstract; and, instead of deleting the "GIMP Toolkit" name, I just added a footnote after it stating it was outdated.
> 
> Some of the information you added was put into a new sub-subsection; and I have also added a credit line containing your name ("Edited by Walter Bender, Sugar Labs Marketing").
> 
> A grayscale version is provided in case the user's printing limitations require.
> 
> <sugar_mono.pdf><sugar_mono.tex><sugar.pdf><sugar.tex>
> On Nov 10, 2013, at 8:22 AM, Walter Bender <walter.bender at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
>> I put my comments inline <-- COMMENT -->
>> 
>> regards.
>> 
>> -walter
>> 
>> On Sun, Nov 10, 2013 at 11:10 AM, Walter Bender <walter.bender at gmail.com> wrote:
>>> Can do. But it seems you are setting a rather high bar for feedback.
>>> 
>>> -walter
>>> 
>>> On Sat, Nov 9, 2013 at 11:45 PM, Ryan Cunningham <rvskmbrly3 at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> I would like to receive these edits in the form of a unified diff between the original LaTeX file and the new LaTeX file.
>>>> 
>>>> If you don't know how to create a unified diff, type
>>>> 
>>>> diff -Naur <file1> <file2>
>>>> 
>>>> at a terminal prompt.
>>>> 
>>>> You should have good experience at typesetting with LaTeX2e before you make these edits.
>>>> 
>>>> --
>>>> Ryan Cunningham
>>>> 
>>>> On Nov 9, 2013, at 3:41 PM, Walter Bender <walter.bender at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>>> Ryan,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks for writing this. I have a few suggested edits. How would you
>>>>> like to receive them?
>>>>> 
>>>>> regards.
>>>>> 
>>>>> -walter
>>>>> 
>>>>> On Sat, Nov 9, 2013 at 10:39 AM, Ryan Cunningham <rvskmbrly3 at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>> On Sat, Nov 9, 2013 at 7:09 AM, Ryan Cunningham <rvskmbrly3 at gmail.com>
>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> To the members of the list:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I would like to send proposed documentation for Sugar to this list. The
>>>>>>> documentation is attached to this message in the PDF format, and should be
>>>>>>> forwarded to the Documentation Team.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> The documentation was written using XeLaTeX, with the DejaVu Sans and
>>>>>>> DejaVu Sans Mono fonts.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Sincerely,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Ryan Cunningham
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> --
>>>>>>> Sent from my iPod
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Sorry... I had some mistakes to correct, including sending you the source
>>>>>> code.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> --
>>>>>> Ryan Cunningham
>>>>>> 
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>>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> --
>>>>> Walter Bender
>>>>> Sugar Labs
>>>>> http://www.sugarlabs.org
>>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> --
>>> Walter Bender
>>> Sugar Labs
>>> http://www.sugarlabs.org
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> -- 
>> Walter Bender
>> Sugar Labs
>> http://www.sugarlabs.org
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