Need the slogan and feedback on the letter. What do we say to get the kind of feedback we need?

[Caroline Meeks]

Dear TIE folks,

I am working with Sugar Labs on improving Marketing.  I'd love feedback from
educators interested in technology and education (ie people like you) on
whether our elevator pitch and slogan are effective and understandable.

Slogan:

Elevator Pitch: "Heard of the One Laptop per Child project?  Sugar is the
learning
platform for OLPC.  Designed by the MIT Media Lab for collaborative and
creative learning by elementary aged children, Sugar is now available
everywhere: netbooks, desktops, even bootable USB sticks.  Be part of it
and help us invent the future of learning."

Please forward any thoughts on how we can improve these. Thanks for your
help!

Caroline

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Caroline Meeks
Solution Grove
Caroline at SolutionGrove.com

617-500-3488 - Office
505-213-3268 - Fax
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