Elevator Pitch and Meeting Reminder

[Marco Pesenti Gritti]

On Tue, Jan 6, 2009 at 12:30 AM, Sankarshan Mukhopadhyay
<foss.mailinglists at gmail.com> wrote:
> "Heard of the One Laptop per Child project?  Sugar is the learning
> platform for OLPC.  Designed for elementary aged children to encourage
> collaborative and creative learning. It is now available everywhere:
> netbooks, desktops, even bootable USB sticks.  Be part of it and help
> us invent the future of learning."
>
> Change - 2 instances of OLPC, 1 instance of Sugar and no mention of
> MIT Media Lab (no idea whether that's good or, bad). I am still
> unhappy with the "available everywhere" phrase.

Maybe "it is now everywhere"? (not sure why you are unhappy about it though).

Marco