<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On 30 March 2016 at 20:20, Walter Bender <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:walter.bender@gmail.com" target="_blank">walter.bender@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div style="font-size:12.8px">7. Treasurer position and process (Adam and Caryl) See [1]</div></blockquote><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">... </blockquote><blockquote style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex" class="gmail_quote"><span style="font-size:12.8px">[1] <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/16jIFuZ9bX-Bv675BpA1KmcEcRcX4PRCOUEX0ICRUkOc/edit" target="_blank"><span class="">https</span>://<span class="">docs</span>.<span class="">google</span>.<span class="">com</span>/<span class="">document</span>/<span class="">d</span>/<span class="">16jIFuZ9bX</span>-Bv675BpA1KmcEcRcX4PRCOUEX0ICRUkOc/<span class="">edit</span></a></span></blockquote><div> </div></div>I read the doc and the structure of the policy seems good, but I would like to suggest some edits</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">- general edits for clarity, not exactly like <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special_English">https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special_English</a> but in that direction</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">- a section of the document for numbering it (<a href="http://semver.org">semver.org</a> style) </div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">- a section for declaring variables like $X and $Y<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">I therefore requested comment access via Google Docs :)</div></div>