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[Sean DALY]

thanks Iain looks good

some typos:
Wwork -> Work
FotoToon -> OK is singular not plural
speech and though -> speech and thought
Paint provides to tools -> Paint provides tools
Make Sugar activities -> Make Sugar Activities / edit existing activities
-> edit existing Activities / Browse activity -> Browse Activity
(((Activities always init-capitalized in Sugar context when describing
applications)))

Also Pippy & Develop should be in a "Getting Technical" section not
regrouped under "Learning by doing" please

Tweaks:
* Get Books. Download electronic books from all over the web. Explore with
ease the
  classics and modern books from the Internet Archive, Feedbooks, etc.

Music - I think this refers to the Jukebox Activity, should be:
* Jukebox. Media player to play different kinds of audio and video files.
However, I am not sure if this Activity is in the latest SoaS or not?

* Record is the basic rich-media capture Activity. It lets you capture
still images, video, and/or audio. (((remove "for the laptop" - we can't
assume SoaS will be running on a laptop)))

Finally, an HTML issue: the left/right curly quote marks (cf. "office
desktop") which probably came in from copy/pasted text should either be
replacd with simple double parentheses (" ") or the HTML entities
“ and ”

thanks
Sean


On Sun, May 17, 2015 at 6:12 PM, Iain Brown Douglas <
iain at browndouglas.plus.com> wrote:

> On Sun, 2015-05-17 at 15:14 +0200, Sean DALY wrote:
> > Peter - Walter's edits were for the Activities descriptions, mine were
> > for the introduction, no reconciliation necessary
> >
> >
> > Sean
> >
> >
> >
> > On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 12:38 PM, Peter Robinson
> > <pbrobinson at gmail.com> wrote:
> >         Walter sent some edits, I believe most of those have gone in,
> >         we need
> >         to update titles still I believe.
> >
> >         This is what we currently have, the Activities list and layout
> >         are now set.
> >
> >         http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/
> >
> >         We can tweak the text but I need to have the edits
> >         co-ordinated,
>
> Hi all,
>
> The attached text file starts from
> http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/, taken during Sunday,
> with contributions from Sean & Walter/Sam added.
>
> There is still some work to do, additions, subtractions or comments
> please!
>
> Regards,
>
> Iain
>
> >          I
> >         don't have time to to do that so please liaise with Walter to
> >         come up
> >         with the final edits so I can submit them early next week as a
> >         single
> >         final edit.
> >
> >         Peter
> >
> >
> >
> >         On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 11:25 AM, Sean DALY
> >         <sdaly.be at gmail.com> wrote:
> >         > Peter - are the intro edits I sent going in?
> >         > thanks
> >         > Sean
> >         >
> >         >
> >         > On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 3:00 PM, Peter Robinson
> >         <pbrobinson at gmail.com>
> >         > wrote:
> >         >>
> >         >> It's already in process
> >         >>
> >         >> On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 1:02 PM, Sam P.
> >         <sam.parkinson3 at gmail.com> wrote:
> >         >> > Hi Peter,
> >         >> >
> >         >> > I think Walter send out a good copy [1] with headers -
> >         maybe we could
> >         >> > use
> >         >> > those headers?
> >         >> >
> >         >> > Thanks,
> >         >> > Sam
> >         >> >
> >         >> > [1]
> >
> http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2015-May/050190.html
> >         >> >
> >         >> > On Thu, May 14, 2015 at 7:09 PM Peter Robinson
> >         <pbrobinson at gmail.com>
> >         >> > wrote:
> >         >> >>
> >         >> >> On Thu, May 14, 2015 at 6:15 AM, Sam Parkinson
> >         >> >> <sam.parkinson3 at gmail.com>
> >         >> >> wrote:
> >         >> >> > Hi Peter,
> >         >> >> >
> >         >> >> > Peter Robinson wrote:
> >         >> >> >> Hi Sam, Gonzalo et el,
> >         >> >> >>
> >         >> >> >> I've worked with the Fedora web team to update it
> >         some based
> >         >> >> >> partially
> >         >> >> >> on Sam's details below.
> >         >> >> >>
> >         >> >> >> Details are here:
> >         >> >> >> http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/
> >         >> >> >>
> >         >> >> >> Let me know of any feedback, I personally think it
> >         looks really fab!
> >         >> >> >
> >         >> >> > Yeah, it does.
> >         >> >> >
> >         >> >> > Is there a way to have different headers?  Some of the
> >         headings (esp.
> >         >> >> > Education) are not aappropriate for Sugar.
> >         >> >>
> >         >> >> Yes, provide me details in concise details and we'll
> >         review them and
> >         >> >> get them integrated. I knew it wasn't perfect but we
> >         needed to get the
> >         >> >> majority of the bits in place.
> >         >> >>
> >         >> >> Peter
> >         >> _______________________________________________
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> >         >
> >
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