[GSoC] [Sugar-devel] Review Request of GSoC Proposal: Making a Beginner Guide

[Pratul Kumar]

 Hello,

Thanks for providing feedback and guiding me in the right direction.
I have worked on it and tried to add them and make things bit more refined.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xzn-ub8pBCQuz9-RfltzHqDZqY7uZ2xF77MFP_9fKzw/edit?usp=sharing

Kindly have a look at it and if there is something which can be improved,
kindly let me know,
I will be more than happy to work on it.

Regards,
Pratul Kumar

On Mon, Mar 19, 2018 at 1:02 PM, James Cameron <quozl at laptop.org> wrote:

> G'day Pratul,
>
> Thanks for the opportunity to comment on your draft proposal.
>
> Your proposal suffers from lack of measurable controls for risks.  In
> general, you've added responses to the risks which are mostly either
> aspirational, hopeful, or procedural.  Some of the responses don't
> address the risks.
>
> For reference, here is what I had previously written on these risks;
>
> http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2018-February/055030.html
>
> Please do not use HTML for the beginner guide.  Instead, please use
> Markdown.  Markdown has a wider audience of authors.  HTML should be
> generated automatically.
>
> Please consider better controls for risk #3.  My post on 14th February
> gave some ideas.  Just claiming that you'd like to keep working on the
> project after GSoC ... doesn't seem probable.  It is aspirational.
>
> --
> James Cameron
> http://quozl.netrek.org/
>



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